暑假一到, 信箱就被塞滿了:)
很開心看到大家這麼認真! 繼續保持下去!!學測不遠了!
這篇學測作文整體而言
1字數略少
2idea清楚
3以自身為例,有進步前後對比
4偶爾出現中文版英文
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批改後作文:
Learning the foreign language is not easy at all. Everyone must face some difficulties at first.
Take me for an example, for the first time I start learning English grammar, it is so hard that I can barely understand. There are completely different with Chinese grammar. Also, I cannot memorize vocabularies either. It was so frustrated for me to learn English.
I tried to figure out how to improve my English ability. First, I listened to the English radio or TV show on time every morning to improve listening skill. Second, I took notes frequently, and be more focus in the class. Last but not least, I learned English with an open heart. With these three ingredients, my English skills finally made some progress, and I really enjoy learning English.
批改前作文:
Learning the foreign language is not an easy thing. Everyone must had some difficulties at first.
For example, I thought the English Grammar is so hard that I can't understand at first. There are some different parts from Chinese grammar. I can't memorize vocabularies either. It was so frustrated learning English when I was young.
I started to find a way to improve my English skill. First, I listened to the English radio show on time every morning to improve my listening skill. Next, I took notes frequently, and be more focus in the class. Last but not least, I learned English with an open heart. With these three ingredients, my English skills finally got some progress, and I fall in love with learning English.
很開心看到大家這麼認真! 繼續保持下去!!學測不遠了!
這篇學測作文整體而言
1字數略少
2idea清楚
3以自身為例,有進步前後對比
4偶爾出現中文版英文
你也想改作文嗎? it's free!!
http://goodideaready.weebly.com/335212599120316259912520925913.html
批改後作文:
Learning the foreign language is not easy at all. Everyone must face some difficulties at first.
Take me for an example, for the first time I start learning English grammar, it is so hard that I can barely understand. There are completely different with Chinese grammar. Also, I cannot memorize vocabularies either. It was so frustrated for me to learn English.
I tried to figure out how to improve my English ability. First, I listened to the English radio or TV show on time every morning to improve listening skill. Second, I took notes frequently, and be more focus in the class. Last but not least, I learned English with an open heart. With these three ingredients, my English skills finally made some progress, and I really enjoy learning English.
批改前作文:
Learning the foreign language is not an easy thing. Everyone must had some difficulties at first.
For example, I thought the English Grammar is so hard that I can't understand at first. There are some different parts from Chinese grammar. I can't memorize vocabularies either. It was so frustrated learning English when I was young.
I started to find a way to improve my English skill. First, I listened to the English radio show on time every morning to improve my listening skill. Next, I took notes frequently, and be more focus in the class. Last but not least, I learned English with an open heart. With these three ingredients, my English skills finally got some progress, and I fall in love with learning English.